- 相關(guān)推薦
考研英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)指南三步成文
眾所周知，坊間廣泛傳抄的模板固然簡(jiǎn)單易學(xué)，好記好背，但問(wèn)題隨之而來(lái)，模板就算有幾十個(gè)，相比起數(shù)以千萬(wàn)計(jì)的考生，仍是微不足道的，用了同一個(gè)模板撞車(chē)的可能性極大。而一旦撞到了“雷同”這一鬼門(mén)關(guān)，再是泣血而成的作文必定成為黃泉路上的冤鬼。因此，要用模板就必定要避免雷同，要避免雷同就必定要獨(dú)創(chuàng)，要獨(dú)創(chuàng)就必定要在作文中用自己的結(jié)構(gòu)、句型和詞匯，要達(dá)到這種運(yùn)用自如的熟練程度就請(qǐng)看下面的“三步成文”作文法。
注意，此處為了詳細(xì)講解和讓考生體會(huì)作文法的運(yùn)用過(guò)程，所選范文字?jǐn)?shù)都大大超過(guò)了考研作文要求。
第一步構(gòu)造個(gè)性模板——避免雷同之上上策
考題
It is generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be. Give possible reasons and your recommendations.
審題可知，本題是論證反駁型文章。第一步，按最基本的“提出問(wèn)題——分析問(wèn)題——解決問(wèn)題”的“三段式”寫(xiě)作思路構(gòu)思，選定下
面這個(gè)基本模板進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。
模板中已經(jīng)給出了不少高分的結(jié)構(gòu)句型，就像造房時(shí)打了地基、搭了鋼筋，
第二步，我們需要在模板橫線處填入一些與內(nèi)容相關(guān)的句型，即我們的論點(diǎn)論據(jù)。
第一段橫線處加入families are now not as close as they used to be.引用題目中原文，但又非照抄，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題。
第二段分析原因，擬定有三個(gè)主要原因，填入較為簡(jiǎn)單的句式：一是nowadays many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere；二是compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People have to concentrate their efforts upon work.；三是People prefer various kinds of recreational facilities to chatting with their family members.這就是提煉出來(lái)的三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)。
再進(jìn)一步將它擴(kuò)充，填入一些結(jié)果或細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展句：第一個(gè)論點(diǎn)后放as time passes, children become unfamiliar with their parents.第二個(gè)論點(diǎn)后放they don’t spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is decrease.第三個(gè)論點(diǎn)后舉具體例子，Their spare time is mostly taken by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.第二段的內(nèi)容就非常充實(shí)了。
第三段提出解決方案：首句填入最終目標(biāo)prevent such family alienation.接著在一、二、三點(diǎn)對(duì)策處填入具體的句子，分別是：①family members living away from one another should often make a phone call or write a letter; ②for those living together, it is a good idea to take some spare time to spend more time with each other; ③a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize its importance and emphasize it.
第四段總結(jié)全文，因?yàn)槟０逯袠?gòu)造的句型意思已經(jīng)很完整，只需再點(diǎn)出全文文眼即the alienation of family members和全文主旨prevent it，濃縮即是精華。
現(xiàn)在，文章的基本內(nèi)容已經(jīng)有了，就像造房時(shí)已經(jīng)把磚塊都填入了鋼筋構(gòu)架中。
第三步我們要運(yùn)用一些高級(jí)的詞匯，或銜接或句子或加強(qiáng)語(yǔ)意，使文章再上一個(gè)檔次
這好比是往磚塊之間的縫細(xì)處抹上水泥，使兩兩粘和，再將整個(gè)磚面附上一層粉漿，使其光滑平整。
在第二段的各分論點(diǎn)和其支撐句中加上表示因果的連接詞As a result, Consequently。再回顧我們剛才填入的句子，斟酌其中的詞語(yǔ)，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，我們有更勝一籌的表達(dá)法。
原句1：People have to focus on their work.
改后：People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work.
原句2：…they don’t spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship decreased.
改后：…they can’t afford to spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds.
原句3：People prefer various kinds of recreational facilities to chatting with their family members.
改后：…the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with their family members.
原句4：Their spare time is mostly taken by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.
改后：Their spare time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.
原句5：…family members living away from one another should often make a phone call or write a letter.
改后：…family members living away from one another should ensure regular contact by phone or letter.
原句6：…for those living together, it is a good idea to take some spare time to spend more time with each other;
改后：…for those living together, it is a good idea to take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other.
原句7：…a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize its importance and emphasize it.
改后：…a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach importance to it.
如此將文中用詞悉心打磨一番之后，文章何愁不大放異彩？“三步成文”之后，我們可見(jiàn)文章全貌了。
范文1
Nowadays there is much discussion as to the phenomenon that families are now not as close as they used to be. This is indeed a problem that we should not neglect any more.
There are many reasons that have caused this problem. In the first place, nowadays many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As a result, as time passes, children become emotionally estranged from their parents. Secondly, compared with the past, social competition is becoming increasingly fierce. People are urged to concentrate their efforts upon work. Consequently, they can’t afford to spend their spare time with their families. The importance of bonds of kinship is gradually fading from their minds. What is more, the availability of various kinds of recreational facilities also diverts people from enjoying chats with their family members. Their spare time is mostly occupied by watching TV, surfing the internet or playing video games.
From what has been discussed above, we may see that it is time for us to take measures to prevent such family alienation. The first step is that family members living away from one another should ensure regular contact by phone or letter. And then for those living together, it is a good idea to take some time off work or recreation periods to spend more time with each other. Finally, a close family relationship can surely be maintained as long as we realize the significant role it plays in our lives and attach importance to it.
To summarize, the alienation of family members has caused public attention. And we should take effective measures suggested to prevent it.
下面我們把剛才的基本模板——模板1改頭換面，看如何選句選詞構(gòu)造出一個(gè)新的模板。
首段引出現(xiàn)象，模板1中用的是Nowadays there is much discussion as to…This is indeed a problem that we should not neglect any more.同為現(xiàn)象句，現(xiàn)在我們換用另外一句可以達(dá)到同樣效果的句子Recently one phenomenon has aroused wide concern, and that is…
第二段分析原因，我們可以將首句中的單詞reason換成詞組account for，接著將幾個(gè)時(shí)間順序詞In the first place, Secondly, What is more換成Firstly, Secondly, And also等作用相同的詞。
第三段解決方案，模板1的句型是From what has been discussed above, we may see that it is time for us to…我們可以采用一種更委婉的總起句Then what should we do to prevent the worsening of this problem? This is no easy task, but some solutions may be very helpful.在具體列出解決方案時(shí)，模板1用的順序詞是The first step should be that, And then, Finally，模板2換用成in the first place, And at the same time, Furthermore。
第四段總結(jié)全文，模板1中概括再次問(wèn)題，用的句型是To summarize, …h(huán)as already caused public attention. And we should take effective measures suggested above to…現(xiàn)在我們換用句型Following these recommendations, we are sure that…，強(qiáng)調(diào)解決方案的可行性。
這樣，一個(gè)全新的模板2就呈現(xiàn)在我們面前了，其文章結(jié)構(gòu)與模板1同出一轍，但模板中的
【考研英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)指南三步成文】相關(guān)文章：
考研英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)心得11-04
考研英語(yǔ)基礎(chǔ)復(fù)習(xí)攻略02-27
針對(duì)考研英語(yǔ)大綱復(fù)習(xí)攻略參考11-17